MDI:
Yifang:
	- Firstly discuss the background estimate, this is the key points, then talk about the interaction region design. 
 
	- Use pointers to indicate, ensuring that what you say corresponds to what is being shown. 
 
	- Change the title to “beam background and MDI”
 
Manqi: The quantification of the background does not reflect in the results.
 
Tracker:
Yifang: 
	- Put the result of COFFEE-2 chip.
	
		- Jianchun: already have many results, put 3-4 pages
 
	
	 
	- Put more ITk strip testing result, balance with other options
 
	- Ignore internal details, like mechanics details
 
	- Need to have comparison between strip and pixel
 
Jianchun: put one page for DC LGAD
 
TPC:
Minghsui: P4 remove the table, only mention 3%
 
ECAL:
Manqi: Suggest to put performance results in previous pages
 
HCAL: 
	- make sure simulation results shown in ECAL and HCAL talks using same calorimeter in simulation
 
	- prepare one backup slides to prove why HCAL is 6 lamda, which related to cost
 
	- prepare one backup slides to explain how 6% come from
 
	- Prepare slides for cost estimation
 
 
Muon: 
Yifang: 
	- reduce to 25 pages
 
	- Electronics design should be finalized before review
 
 
Magnet:
	- Jianchun: don’t list all chapters
 
	- Yifang: P14 muon detector assembly should be unified, no dead zone, but need to consider impact of leakage issue 
 
 
Electronics:
Yifang: 
	- remove P7 
 
	- GBTx: indicate that we are willing to cooperate with CERN. If it’s not woked, we are also ready for developing by ourselves
 
 
TDAQ:
Yifang: too many options, suggests to remove full software option
 
Software:
Yifang: 
	- should emphasis that our contribution is widely used by others
 
	- need a schedule table, indicating what is missing and when to be finsihed
 
 
Mechanics:
Yifang: 
	- Create an animation of the installation sequence.
 
	- P8 add a table, summarize deformation of xyz direction
 
 
Performance:
Yifang:
	- Summary table missing new physics study: long-lived particle, missing momentum.
 
	- P20 double check number with Yang Zhang
 
	- P21 enlarge the table, remove column 2 and 3, add conclusion of physics improvement
 
	- ECAL change to <2%, then update numbers in the table in page 21
 
Qi Yan: 
	- Suggest to introduce starting from detector indicator, then talk about physics indicators.
 
             
            
                
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